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These Capsules rest in my hand

Disguised as a colorful candy,

I pop them in my mouth

And swallow with glee,

It feels as though,

I'm finally set free,

From life's unfiltered reality.



Falling like angels of heaven,

Directly

Into the pits of hell,

Numbness trickles, down my spine

Until it flows,

Like a river of nothing.



The dark intangible demons, of insecurity

Puncture my bubble of hope,

Angels of chalky assortment

Vanquish them, with a sharp ignorance,

Leaving the past,

Lost and forgotten,



The numbness begins to fade,

Will these demons attack again?

Shimmering drops of translucent agony

Invade my face,

When I decide to take some more,

Just in case.
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If you enjoy this one! please consider watching me....because i can't say when all i can say is sometime soon there will be more like this....and tied to this one! something i have been working on for awhile now....hope you will stick around to see it!!!

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o.o nice..

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Touching

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i love the imagery and the feel the work makes you get, like you are really there. good job.

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<333 gelie.
:icondark-windsong:
Brillaint :+fav: You have painted such a vivid picture here, you are an amazing writer!

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Thank you! so very much its always good to hear something like that!

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Ok, so i write a lot of poetry! but thats not the only thing i do! i also have some digital fan art! but yeah i also hope to get pics on here eventually so please CHECK ME OUT! [link]

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You're so very welcome. Us writers are so unnoticed on DA :(

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wow... this is beutiful... wish I could write poems this good!

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Thank a you very much!....this is one of the deepest ones i have written

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Ok, so i write a lot of poetry! but thats not the only thing i do! i also have some digital fan art! but yeah i also hope to get pics on here eventually so please CHECK ME OUT! [link]

"PRYING OPEN MY THIRD EYE" !TOOL!

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